My first job interview was two year[a]s ago. I was still at the university. It was a successful interview, and a great experience.

My FIRST JOB INTERVIEW

My first job interview was two year^[a]s ago. I was still at the university. It was a successful interview, and a great experience.

First of all, I was applying to the Accounting department ^[b]in a very important company called Pecsa. I arrived there at 10:00 am and my interview started at 12.00 pm, I had to wait for almost 2 hours. There were a lot of people for the same job. When my interview started, the owner of the company asked me general questions like  
   ^[c][d]what do you know about Pecsa? Do you have any experience for the job? Why do you consider that you have the skills for the job?  So I could answer each question carefully  ^[e]because a few weeks ago^[f], I was reading some information about extreme ^[g]interviews, and it helped me a lot.

Suddenly, when I thought that the interview had finished, the owner told me that she had a last question for me. I was ready to listen ^[h]to the question but it surprised me because I didn’t wait^[i] a question like that. It was, “If you have a case about an argument between your best employee and your best customer, what will you do?” That question made me think a lot, but finally I had an answer for her. I think, it was a good answer because a few days laterthey called me for the job.

To conclude, my first interview was an excellent moment to develop my skills as a professional.

Dear Graciela,

A few corrections were made. Below you will find some links that will help you review some aspects of the language:

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/es/gramatica/gramatica-britanica/expect-hope-or-wait

http://wikidiff.com/employee/employer

One more thing, remember that it’s important to respect the number of words required. You wrote 247 words.

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